Company: Life Co. Ltd.
Brand Name: Durable Depression
Tagline: A hollow darkness is what prevails in the end.
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Free! Free! Free!
available absolutely,
adamantly free,
whisper in your friend’s ears
or shout out loud
spitting on your microphones,
let everybody know,
let anybody and everybody know-
the dying man at the pier,
infant in the nursery,
the troubled actress,
the senile scientist,
masochistic husband,
a gullible wife,
stern mother-in-law,
the don of the mafia,
a middle school bully,
shy little girl who believes in fairies,
the eunuch who wants a new life,
a chalk addicted rock star-
let everybody know,
.
a poet’s soul is available for free,
come on dip your rags and
your dirty fingers and
the sickly nails of your toes,
drench your shampooed hair
in the filth of the words,
seeping out of this damaged soul,
take away with you-
some pain,
some lost compassion,
some torn dreams,
some of the bloody emotions,
some of the misinterpreted anger,
some of the unacknowledged hatred,
also that repetitive imagination,
those fervent wishes never coming true,
don’t forget the prickling thoughts,
or the ice-cold dead voice,
and the monstrosity of those feelings,
or that numbing numbness-
take it all away,
empty this tank of every single thing,
not a drop to be left behind,
it has no use anymore,
but for the hollowness,
that would be left behind
perpetuating forever
in its hollow state.
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*For dVerse Poetics where Brian has prompted us to use slogans and catchphrases in poetry. I couldn’t think of an entirely written poem of slogans.
damn, brother…that was a rip….one i would love to hear performed though i imagine your tongue might be in knots by the end…ha…dont give away your poet soul..i know it hurts at times to feel it all…but dang…well played sir…
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ha – def. – let everybody know… shout it out and off the soul – aren’t word a great way to funnel our emotions into something that others can profit – and even more when they get it for free
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What a great script for an infomercial. :). Awesome!
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There is so much pain lurking between the lines. This is such a strong write, HA. My wish is that peace invade you beautiful poetic sensibility.
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This is so powerful. I really like your style here and can definitely relate.
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oh my yes, left me almost, almost speechless
may the hollow places be filled
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Very strong poem, HA….especially the second stanza (for me). Sometimes the poet’s soul is indeed filled with pain. I feel it within the lines.
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Powerful write HA – do so hope those hollow places are filled.
Kind regards
Anna :o]
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I love what you did, very imaginative perspective ~ I hope someone is giving back to the poor poet’s soul as it can run on empty & hollow ~
everyday amazing: When it’s the real thing
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strong words, powerful images… a lot of pain seeps through and a lot of truth.
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This sounds like some open mic stuff..it would be great to hear it read..don’t let them take the poet’s soul..we need to hang on to our souls …a strong and powerful write.
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Great write, HA. Powerful stuff! As often do happen a poet’s tormented soul gets in the way. But good to be aware!
Hank
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This is probably the best I have read from you.. very strong… and scary at the same time.. cuts like a knife, and it should be read aloud…
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I agree with everyone else who said it needs an open mic. Most excellent!
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Wow, this is awesome. And how true! We lay ourselves on railroad tracks emotionally. We wear our hearts on our verses’ sleeves. What a fresh, stunning write.
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