a passing day
smeared with the fading sunlight-
I whisper goodbye
.
winter solstice-
warmth enclosed in sweater
made of evening light
.
*Linking it up with Carpe Diem # 631
a passing day
smeared with the fading sunlight-
I whisper goodbye
.
winter solstice-
warmth enclosed in sweater
made of evening light
.
*Linking it up with Carpe Diem # 631
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Oh, so very nice, HA — the first has such a tremendous sense of loss — and the second is very sweet. 🙂
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Simple but nice!!!!
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Wow Anmol what a wonderful painting and your set of haiku is just gorgeous. I am glad to see you here again …
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Hi HA–I especially like the second one–the sweater of evening light–it may have short sleeves though! (That is a joke–it’s a very sweet poem.) K.
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Two very nice ones indeed – your presence missed!
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Love that sweater!
Solstice Haiku
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Oh yes.. the sweater.. I love that.
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Saying goodbye to the light is a bittersweet experience.
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As the seasons change from your world to mine. Nice haiku, loved the sweater☺️
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passing from one place
to another….now we march
to the light
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Wow! Loved the first one 🙂
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