journey of a life
cheerful cries of an infant
coughs of an old man
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journey of a life
innocence of a new born
an adult’s cunning
journey of a life
cheerful cries of an infant
coughs of an old man
~
journey of a life
innocence of a new born
an adult’s cunning
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Gorgeous haikus. Very clever
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Thank you. 🙂
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Love the second one. There’s a slight edge to it depending on how you take the last line.
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Yes, it depends on how you take it.. Thanks for the kind words..
And a Happy 4th of July to you. I hope you are enjoying yourself. 🙂
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Happy 4th of July. Easing into the day for sun, sweat, and chasing a toddler through a park. 😀
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Sounds like fun.. 🙂
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Simple distinctions, and clear. May you have a long life, and always know innocence when you see it.
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Thank you for the kind wishes and I sincerely wish you the very same. 🙂
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Beautifully portrayed opposite thoughts
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thanks a lot..
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So much truth written in so few lines. It does seem as if you just blinked and then you look in the mirror one day and you have become a senior citizen. Where does the time go? The saying “Time flies!” is a very true statement. And it is such a sad thing that adults lose the innocence of childhood and in doing so lose so much joy of their life.
Thanks for sharing such thoughtful Haiku’s with us for this weeks Theme Thursday. May you always keep some of the child’s joy in your life.
God bless.
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Thank you so much for sharing your words. And for the kind wishes and remarks.
I wish you a great day ahead. 🙂
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