fly like an eagle
as free as a bird in the sky
be a dream catcher
~
glide along the flow of air
unfasten your wings of love
.
*For Carpe Diem Tan Renga # 9. The haiku is written by Kristjaan; complimenting it are my two seven-syllable lines.
fly like an eagle
as free as a bird in the sky
be a dream catcher
~
glide along the flow of air
unfasten your wings of love
.
*For Carpe Diem Tan Renga # 9. The haiku is written by Kristjaan; complimenting it are my two seven-syllable lines.
fluttering white wings
tears of love shed on the beings
a rain-angel smiles
~
a rain-angel smiles
compassion for the earthlings
makes everything right
~
makes everything right
colors splatter on the sky
happiness abounds
~
happiness abounds
her compassionate smiling
reverent heads bow
~
reverent heads bow
the love spreads its wings to fly
peace ensues around
~
peace ensues around
compassion for each other
a happy ending
source- daily painters
kiss of the sunlight
the rose bushes turn scarlet
nature’s affection
~
nature’s affection
birds lunging to horizon
gentle blowing wind
~
And inspired from Kristjaan’s love haiku,
shadows of the night
hands held under the black cloak
hiding affection
~
a love is lovely
let it fly high with free wings
accept affection
courtesy of google images
* Written in response of Carpe Diem # 238.
Blue dreams of tranquility,
sounds of fluttering wings,
views of setting suns,
the battered hope of reemergence
the need of resurgence,
ending this life of puns,
finding a way that brings,
the night of solace, motility
I dream blue dreams
and my insufferable pain gleams.
P.s.- Another piece in the poetic form, I created.. Other poems like this- Blue Thing, Red Lust, Violet Juice. Rules- (i) Three stanzas, rhyming scheme being- ABCD/DCBA/EE, (ii) Description of some strong emotion and (iii)Prominence of a color.