forgotten brook
running the centuries down
locked in rock
~
distant from the world
obscured by cavernous trees
a stream flowing by
* The first haiku is written by the author Jane Reichhold. And the second one is my inspired creation. Written for Carpe Diem Special # 46.
Kikusha Ni’s Creation:-
my body all alone
in this autumn I feel –
the dusk in rain
~
My inspired creations:-
alone in the field
I feel the feel of rain drops
stream of silent tears
~
at the edge of ship
glancing at shades of water
lone feeling of peace
P.s.- The two haiku I have created are very close to my heart. They are written in response to Carpe Diem Special 44.
shimmering fireflies
into the eyes of beloved
a passionate love
~
old stream of water
soldier returns home from war
black tears, fireflies gone
~
midnight moon shines bright
hotaru glows at distance
illumination
~
a mid-summer day
young boys trot towards river
waiting for the fire
~
waters set on fire
man gazing into his soul
a soundless twilight
~
splendor of fireflies
fairy tale coming to life
spectators gather
* Written in response of Carpe Diem # 221
* Won’t be able to post for the next 8 days or so; going to miss the wonderful prompts.
HA's Place 