after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
~
eyes look upon the dark sky
awaiting another blaze
* Written in response of Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge # 4.
* The intriguing haiku is written by Bjorn Rudberg. The challenge was to write a couplet, two verses of 7 syllables each, complimenting the haiku.
Here is another one,
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
~
ears keep on buzzing with sounds
eyes glisten with faded light