
© Anmol Arora
free-handed percussions — nightly detours
into amatory affairs — touch and wiggle —
the ambient smell of stale booze, fresh-smokes
on their breaths, a chandelier dripping with light,
bursting and blooming into the eyes,
sax and guitar, reverberating desires, up and loud —
the head nods that leave no room for improvisation.
the fingers find their way to the sequestered spots,
recognizing the rising heat in the night-time breeze,
my nips attentive to words grazed against my neck
along the sternocleidomastoids (the tumescence and
detumescence palpable in a cloth traveled melody) —
the blues rise in a leaf-like cadence, my heart palpitates
to the response of my thighs (shuttered, caving all within) —
freehanded percussions, nightly detours that settle
all that rises, as the lights expand in a cross-rhythm,
chaotic, high-rising, groping, grabbing, pulling, spilling,
tinkling down my spine.
© Anmol Arora 2018
For With Real Toads’ Notebook Poetry: I do not know if my writing is even comprehensible — I do write in my notebook at times but mostly it’s when there is a rush of a particular thought or experience and I have to jot it down — so my pen glides all over the page in its need to capture all of it in a jiffy before it extinguishes to nothing — I have taken my time in penning this one down after typing it primarily with a few non-intrusive edits. Ha! As for the poem, I have used the precise terms for a particular reason which delves into the biological aspect, to distance it from desire or want. Hope it doesn’t hinder the experience.
Also linking it with the Poetry Pantry at PU.
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You have such neat handwriting, Anmol, and you’ve captured the ambience of a ‘jazzin’ kind of night’ in such lines as:
‘the ambient smell of stale booze, fresh-smokes
on their breaths…’;
‘sax and guitar, reverberating desires, up and loud —
the head nods that leave no room for improvisation’;
and the repetition of ‘freehanded percussions’.
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Great phrases, I really like “my nips attentive to words grazed against my neck”. Well captured!
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Gorgeous poem, thrilling music! My own spine now has shivers going up and down it.
My handwriting is atrocious, always has been. But somehow the thought of a notebook poem is intriguing; might do one too. (Would probably have missed the prompt if you hav\n’t also shared with the Pantry, so thanks.)
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Thanks, Rosemary! ❤
Would love to read what you share. 🙂
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Blues music is quite an aphrodisiac isn’t it? How well your words and the music go together.
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Haha, it certainly can act as an aphrodisiac.
Thank you for your kind words! 🙂
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You’ve put me right into the middle of this experience, Anmol. I can hear the music in your words. Wonderful metaphors. This is one of my favorite poems of yours really. I agree you have neat handwriting. Seems handwriting is a lost art here…not stressed at all.
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Thank you so much, Mary! That is very kind of you to say. I am glad that you could experience that atmosphere here. ❤
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Anmol, you have beautiful handwriting! So artistic. This is a deeply layered and textured poem, with the senses given an overload of imagery.
I will admit that on first reading I thought your line was ‘Sex and guitar’… but sax works just as well
😉
Thank you for sharing your notebook page.
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Me too, may as well be sex and guitar! 🙂
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I read it the same too …. so either we all have “dirty minds” … LOL – or it just infuses itself so well for the natural exchange and ambiance here 😉
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Ha! I thought I had the dirty mind with all the signals and sights of tumescence. XD
Well, such an atmosphere has a palpable sexual energy in it, felt and enjoyed in its own sheltered experience. I certainly enjoyed my evening at the jazz club! I am rather glad that it could be a part of the verse. 🙂
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snorting with absolute delight! LOL – actually, maybe we’re all just closet hedonists 😂
actually, such atmospheres usually are chalk full of all kinds of tensions and energies, including the sexual and perhaps, even instinctual, primal ones, – so why not explore it through verse? it’s part of life in all its fantabulous colours … 😉
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Ha! Sex/Sax, both work in equal measures — one is only intensified by the other.
Thank you for an inspiring prompt and your kind words, Kerry! ❤
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You had me at “freehanded percussions.” a wonderful way to describe a working poet.
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Oh i could never write like that. Your penmanship is excellent. And so are your words
Particularly luv this:
” a chandelier dripping with light,”
Happy Sunday Anmol
Much love…
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Thank you so much, Gillena! ❤
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I somehow always knew and visualized your handwriting to be wonderfully artistic! ❤ This poem sends shivers down my spine .. the images are vivid and puts one right in the middle of the painted scene!
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Ah! That is very kind of you to say. I have a scrawny handwriting when it has to be done hurriedly. I took more time in penning this down to make it more neat and clear. Ha!
I am glad that you found it vivid. Thanks, Sanaa! ❤
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I love this lively and sexy jazz riff!
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First, you penmanship is beautiful as is your poem. I love the musical notes and the sound of a sax is the heart of the blues.
love this part
the blues rise in a leaf-like cadence, my heart palpitates
to the response of my thighs (shuttered, caving all within) —
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Indeed — the sound of sax creates the mood for the blues in such a wonderful manner.
Thank you for your kind words! ❤
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OMG the language in this piece!! I absolutely love it. I have no intention of looking up those words I don’t know because I love how they feel unknown and rhythmic. Really great. Live music really feels like this… intimate and profound and full of desire. Gosh I love this. Love the photo of your written poem on your notebook page too, it is just perfect, though your handwriting is way more restrained than the scene it describes. 🙂
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That is so very kind of you to say, Marian. Thank you! ❤
Live music indeed has all those kinds of intimacies and profundities that make for an intrinsic part of its experience.
I am glad that you liked the photo too — I wrote it with restraint after all. Ha! XD 😉
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This is wonderful.. and I wonder how much of the music was heard and how much was felt… love how you included the body into this.. so often music seems just to be about what you hear, but here I can feel the touch of the blues.
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I agree with Bjorn – Blues really lends itself to that “groove thang” … it’s like an instinctual let loose primal barefoot shake down …. so the way you’ve woven it all together is most apropos HA. 🙂
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You took me to a bluesy nightclub. I could almost hear the saxaphone, smell the stale smoke. Wonderfully written.
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Hearing and feeling music…this is a glorious and sensual poem. I love the sax and guitar and the way your nipples reacted. Your handwriting is so clear and readable. Mine looks like a drunken rat staggering through ink. this is mos def one for the books Anmol. Loved it.
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Ha! I chortled at the drunken rat reference. I am sure that it is totally comprehensible. We don’t need written text anymore, not really. It is only from a nostalgic eye that we look up to them now.
Thank you for your kind words, Toni! ❤
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You said it all with that sternocleidomastoidal! That is the tensile of jazz nights, for sure — “chaotic, high-rising, groping, grabbing, pulling, spilling, / tinkling down my spine.” I memorized the name in that muscle when I was in third grade because it was the longest one one I could find; I’m not sure I’ve ever seen it in a poem before, but then you never quite know what’s gonna come out the sax.
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This was bluesy fun, and I’m jealous of your handwriting.
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You had me at the handwriting. Simply lovely! Love the jazzy scene that is painted in your words here!
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Very cool. Some lovely linger-worthy lines in this – cascading to an awesome (and really, rather brilliant) close. A stunning coming together of visceral sensuality and music – which, of course, is at the heart of jazz.
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I love how you denote the sensuality of this music.
Thank you for your kind words, Wendy! ❤
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I think you’ve pulled off so much of the essences and layers, the grit for the groove of jazz and blues …. it’s a body;s reaction – from the actual musicality of those playing, to those listening in hypnotic sway ….
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Since I love jazz and blues, I adored this poem. Sensual, and rhythmic. I am amazed to see a neat handwriting all in cursive. I can barely write in block letters.
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I’m in.
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I can’t decide if I want a cold shower, a good pair of dancing shoes, or both… Love all the passion spilling out of these lines, the music and feeling, the enticing vibes. Yum!
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I can’t write anymore… I can’t even read the sticky notes I put up… so writing a poem as layered as this, as metaphorical, without a keyboard is simply out of question. Bravo!
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kaykuala
To maintain good handwriting is not an easy task these days. You did it very well coupled with your wonderful word-craft, Anmol!
Hank
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Very exciting and intimate a poem… I love the way it describes the music but also leads the mind to other things… Magnificently done! And your hand writing is artistic and expressive.
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