
Night Fishing at Antibes, 1939 by Pablo Picasso
words enveloping a slight breeze,
igniting curious forms – electric flowers,
dilapidated furnishings –
in this white expanse of high-
rises, and low lying lives (living lies),
words holding aloft meaningless
outlines to my structure, night
breathing its sonorous sounds
of cackling, ravishing through me –
i see gyrating epiphanies
of dahlias and pigeons mating,
of rain falling on the clouds,
bursting spectacles on the ground,
the predators prancing in a loss
of the timidity, of their own flesh.
dreams dreaming themselves
in a dreamscape verse – white doves
fluttering like paper, striking sun,
deepening gashes, of scarlet-violet
thickening into crystal lies (one disguise),
dreams holding fictions apart
from an unlikely truth-like reverie,
and drinking evening dews made of
spider silk, cactuses, subservient me –
i feel the voices of the dead
in my brown breast, thumping
steps of journeys, bound by
ringlets of faith, on the bodies
singled out in their own ecstasy,
of a rigidity, of their own levity.
~
it is a nightly soirée of handsome faces –
dark mouths,
darker eyes,
light dreams,
lighter skies.
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For With Real Toads’ Weekend Challenge; also linking it up with Poetry Pantry at PU
Your write was just like a dream for me. I enjoyed reading.
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What a party, like something out of Sgt. Peppers. I love the line about the dreams dreaming themselves.
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What wonderful visuals. I enjoyed the experience of reading this wonderful poetic journey.
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A very rich poem. I love the different scenes……and a great ending 😊
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Wow from first word to last. This is intriguing.
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This is phenomenal! As an ekphrastic account of the Picasso or as a painting of the inner landscape of dreams, your language is rich and each image resounds.
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How wonderful, your nightly soiree. I rarely remember my dreams, and wish i could.
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This delight of a poem bring to mind “The Circular Ruins”, by Jorge Luis Borges. Especially in the fourth stanza, in that circle where dreams build the reality that dreams them real. And your ending, oh! what a painting, a moving painting… dark and bright singing and dancing about life.
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My goodness this is truly a masterpiece! 😍 Especially love “I see gyrating epiphanies of dahlias and pigeons mating, of rain falling on the clouds, bursting spectacles on the ground.” 💜
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Words pair well with Picasso!
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This has just terrific sounds as well as images. Everything gyrates and vibrates; a lot of energy, dreams dreaming themselves and being dreamt. Thanks so much. k.
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this is breathtaking. i mean, “dreams dreaming themselves”?
loved the vivid imagery. this is a dream that is hard to forget. 🙂
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That was quite a potpourri of images within images and dreams within dreams… the high rises and low lives…sadly that resonates!
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Maybe the wrong label for Picasso, but this seems to me gorgeously surreal (and surreally gorgeous).
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A stunning surreal dream poem, HA. I love the lines:
‘dreams dreaming themselves
in a dreamscape verse – white doves
fluttering like paper…’
and
‘dreams holding fictions apart
from an unlikely truth-like reverie’.
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This is some jazzy nightmusic, dancing on a precipice of bones! Why do poems inspire us so? Because they allow us to write like “dreams dreaming themselves / in a dreamscape verse.” Amen! Truly potent poem.
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Dreams dreaming themselves. Love that concept. It does seem like that so often.
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I like “dreams holding fictions apart.”
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While this soiree is certainly an entertaining spectacle, I’m not sure I’d have the stamina to witness it night after night! 😉
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So well done HA. Hell is in our dreams.
Anna :o]
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