the ice has taken hold between the two passages,
carrying the crystal white burden of dreams
and the languages of intrinsic qualifications –
to choose the fog over mist, slush over dirt,
and to keep frozen into stone all deals upturned,
all wishes parted by a moment’s touch –
lost is the sudden acquaintance with sensation,
I am near the end, I am at the edge, always dazed,
glorified by the fear of tumbling down – just the bliss
of never seeing the light
for it’s hard to dream with open eyes, for it’s hard
to see through your lips where you reside –
who ever said that this mosaic of understanding is fulfilling?
that blithe sun has devoured all else.
you are the halo, the shadow, the skin to my desire, the symbol
to this paradigm of pain,
and I keep up my silent vigil,
I wait.
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Linking it up with The Tuesday Platform at With Real Toads.
who ever said that this mosaic of understanding is fulfilling?… fantastic!
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Hope spring thaw is on its way. This feels like hitting a real low point… hang on there, narrator.
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who ever said that this mosaic of understanding is fulfilling?
Very profound.
Anmol, I’m happy you dropped in to read mine today
Much love…
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Silent vigil, white fields…. such intricate imagery. Always glad to read a piece from you!
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Really low this.. though a state of frozen waiting…. It’s hard to dream with open eyes… how true that is… it’s always a pleasure to read one of your poems.
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The fight between too much and too little is one that leaves the soul out of breath before it can reach balance. I see this speaker dancing in-between life’s everything, waiting for stability (or something more exciting that should feel just like it) to claim him whole… and leave him free.
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I love the culminating intensity of the last verse.
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Wow!❤️ Such ethereal imagery here 🙂 especially love; “lost is the sudden acquaintance with sensation,I am near the end, I am at the edge, always dazed, glorified by the fear of tumbling down – just the bliss of never seeing the light.” Beautifully haunting❤️
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“It’s hard to dream with eyes open” but your poem made me do it.
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That’s a beautifully chilly phrase:
‘the ice has taken hold between the two passages,
carrying the crystal white burden of dreams’.
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You definitely have a great talent with words. And the painting is just beautiful!
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“..burden of dreams” an interesting twist of words. Loved the poem
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