Convergence Of The Four Winds by Michelle Vyn
be the wind of lost thought
seeking redemption of ideas
that burn
inside the hollow eyes,
have you ever thought of that pink scarf,
bleached, tattered, zooming through the sky
like a fake smile on your lips?
have you ever heeded the power of a blow
of air on the birthday candles, how it
erases the years lived?
be the wind that you can’t be,
be a smelly fart if need be,
be an ode to nature, or
a quatrain that seeks nothing.
do you know of the neck
that was adorned atop the light
house, where I stood, the wind:
my body, my sheath, my life,
and how it felt to be suspended
with nothing else to spare
but for a breath of air,
hair ruffled,
silences bespoken;
do you know that neck
belonged to me?
I died that second,
and I have been dying
thenceforth.
I am the wind, I am
the power,
and I am invariably caught
in this struggle.
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Those birthday candles were the most powerful image for me in this poem – you made me smile, think and reflect – a wonderful piece..
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be a quatrain that seeks nothing… that is a beautiful line..it will stay with me a long while..
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Whistles!! Such a lot of power in your verse especially admire “I am the wind, I am the power, and I am invariably caught in this struggle.” Beautifully penned.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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i love the candle image too and also the pink scarf image with a lot of untold stories….
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I could feel that caught breath, waiting for the next, a moment suspended,, at the lighthouse……..well done!
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I looked for the death in this poem, but found the wind here brought past things to life–except maybe the neck of the light house, maybe the home of the scarf that smiled and left and the breath that erased years. Quite an important neck that contains and stands in for so much power.
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What powerful imagery here, HA!
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HA, you weaved such a powerful piece, with what may appear as simple images. I think I would call it “what we do not always notice”, or think about, in our daily duties. This part is just WOW :”have you ever heeded the power of a blow
of air on the birthday candles, how it
erases the years lived?”
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❤️❤️
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a quatrain that seeks nothing
Something about this image makes me want to start singing to no one in particular, perhaps to a stone or a frog.
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I love your symbol – the neck; One moment it brandishes a sky colored scarf the next it is naked above the lighthouse. Great poem HA
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