dear
oh Dear –
it’s an evening of amour,
experienced alone, behind the open
windows- a view for the world
abstaining from desire, I disrobe
the words, and let them ablaze
on
the tip
of
my tongue.
dear
oh Dear –
let’s flow, let’s blow, let’s sing,
let’s waltz around in our skins,
*तू स्पर्श है तो मैं एहसास,
लब से जो तू छू ले तो मैं विलाप,
तू पुष्प जो है तो मैं भँवरा हूँ.
let’s flow, let’s blow, let’s sing,
let loose control.
in dots and dashes,
I sigh, my last word,
in dots and dashes.
dear
oh Dear –
*you are the touch, I am sensation,
you are the kiss, I am that moan,
you are the flower and I, a bumble-bee.
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This one flows like a warm breeze..longing and loving and loss all mixed together with a beauty – superbly enhanced by the image
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How often that desired evening of love is unfulfilled. Oh dear where is my dear.
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It reminded me of the sweet, little fantasies we have at nightfalls, to belong. Great write HA, I especially enjoyed the beginning.
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I disrobe
the words, and let them ablaze
on the tip of my tongue.
Stunning use of diction 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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so sweet and tender.
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I disrobe
the words, and let them ablaze
on
the tip
of
my tongue.
I love the phrasing of these words. Fine writing.
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This is luscious….it would go perfectly with the prompt at Imaginary Garden with Real Toads this week. I love this, in particular: “you are the flower and I, a bumble-bee.”
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Sometimes the best moments are played alone… what a wonderful poem…Google translate did less well though… I love the mic of languages.
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I like “I disrobe the words and let them blaze…..”
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Oh dear this flows with such passion…rolling its thoughts on the wind.
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What a beautiful photograph.
This is my favorite part of your poem:
“abstaining from desire, I disrobe
the words”
I really like the encoded section as well.
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Yes, like others have said, I really like the luxurious flow of your words. How they are as sensual as your words. Very nice.
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Makes me think “o dear what can the matter be? Where o where has my true love gone? ”
Luv the way you however romanced your longing into this poem
Thanks for stopping over at my Sunday Lime today
Much love…
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I agree with Bjorn that some of the best moments are played alone. Sometime we must make the most of the company we have…and sometimes it is only ourselves.
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Love the photo and the disrobing of words,
Elizabeth
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Like the way you’ve woven both languages together…a great effect. Would love to try this style someday!
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This is beautiful, romantic, sensual. I enjoyed this so much.
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Nice flow to words.
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Here is where I tell you then 🙂 … that was excellent in form, structure, and imaginative theme …coalesced. Glad to meet you.
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