what is with all these dew drops,
that stand a p a r t and together
on the pebbles of my path,
it meanders through tunnels
and valleys, overgrowth everywhere,
sprouting seeds of tolerance and bearing.
be careful of your
heart because where it sets
becomes your yearning, it’s a debt that won’t go
off, it will surely be yours, like those eyes.
so be a Ferris wheel of life, winds won’t stop you.
For Writing Prompt# 132 at MLM Menagerie and Micro Poetry at At Real Toads.
This is Poem # 8 for my 30 Days, 30 Poems Challenge. And now I have started to get restless. Ha!
11 thoughts on “be careful”
I love the opening image of the dewdrops on the path ahead. This is a very stirring poem. Thank you for participating.
I agree with Kerry that is one fabulous opening! I am so happy to see you writing again Anmol =)
Thanks for visiting.
Of course the opening lines, but together with the closing lines it’s perfection.. Happy to see you writing Anmol… you have been missed.
Lovely take on the collage HA, so well done….
dew drops, that stand a p a r t – clever and effective!
Perfect for beginning to end Anmol
Lovely HA … this is a great piece, I enjoyed your bits of experiments like with heart and the opening is great — wise conclusion!
A lovely poem, HA, you got me at the first stanza right up to the end!
Thank you, I’d love to be a Ferris wheel! 🙂