we say,
justice has
prevailed-
the black and white verse has been drenched
by a solemn red, rigorous and redundant in
its vitality – the heads have been held off – of
opposition, the sirens have eaten us to bones.
the neighing warrior wields a black flag inside
the quarters – purple and pallor – and gets shot
by the crowd of a blind following, lives are on
sale today, get one if you buy four, its 70% off.
and we say
we are at
liberty-
mindless wandering and shameless scurrying,
we read books upside down, watch only the back-
ground, everything else has been wiped off, of
the faces, dead and cumbersome, in day’s off light.
and life goes on, hunched shoulders walk forth,
we carry each others’ blood on each others’ lips
and satiate our thirst of forced will, justice has
prevailed, and we are at liberty, so rampage on.
.
This is Poem # 5 for my 30 Days, 30 Poems Challenge.
Inspired from dVerse MTB where the point of discussion is enjambment.
Yes, this poem is political in nature. I have written this in solidarity with all the writers and filmmakers and scientists and intellectuals returning the awards given to them by government or government funded organisations, as a mark of protest against the growing intolerance in the country and so to safeguard our rights to dissent and freedom of speech and expression.
I think you have put your finger of the precise reason why it’s important to write… constantly write….
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Anmol, why aren’t you linked up yet? Incredible & strong piece, that has emerged out of 30 days of constant writing; damn, very impressive. Put me in mind on the inequity of justice everywhere, as the 1% literally get away with murder, & some folks go to prison for having weed in there glove box. I love the image too. I like your line /we carry each other;s blood on each other’s lips/ juxtaposing a kiss to a wound not an embrace.
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powerful truth in these words
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EXCELLENT use of enjambment here. I love the use of the shorter lines, then longer, creating distance and dissonance. I am chilled, halted and haunted by this line: “the sirens have eaten us to bones.” So powerful.
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This really hits me hard:
“and gets shot
by the crowd of a blind following, lives are on
sale today”
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Freedom a
gift never
for sale
at
Sears
Row
buck..
earn it
spend it
but never
buy it freedom
breathes never chained
or
sold..
my def
of course
i here for now..:)
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A very serious and well-thought-out take! I do wonder how many times justice really does not prevail.
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Very strong images here.. powerful write 🙂
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Our society is broken indeed ~ I specially admire this part:
the black and white verse has been drenched
by a solemn red, rigorous and redundant in
its vitality – the heads have been held off – of
opposition, the sirens have eaten us to bones.
I believe we poets and writers have the power of words & we should use it well ~
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Yet another passionate poem for your 30 days. And though they are not given by the governments, I do not accept “awards” on my blog because I write for peace, for me, for everybody, to hopefully touch someone out there – not because of an “award”.
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Powerful free expression. And good flowing enjambment, too. Peace, Linda
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A call to awareness!
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So many great lines in this, Anmol, and a powerful expression of solidarity against the idiocy of government corruption and criminals. I’m with you!
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powerful, and needed. your voice needs to continue to soar ~
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Beyond powerful, this is scaring. This part really shakes the soul:”and life goes on, hunched shoulders walk forth,
we carry each others’ blood on each others’ lips
and satiate our thirst of forced will, justice has
prevailed, and we are at liberty, so rampage on.”
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