her hair frazzled in wisps of clouds,
she whirls through the nightly sky,
her moon of a bosom glinting, an
illumination of the passing lives.
she whirls through the nightly sky
ever dreamy, in her every dream
of the enchanted orbs of her eyes.
her moon of a bosom glinting, an
evanescent sight of the heavens
I see, in the rifts of her movement, an
illumination of the passing lives.
she is but a miser’s thrift, an object
wandering (I wonder at) through the sky.
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Written in consideration of dVerse MTB and Get Listed for October at With Real Toads.
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What an excellent use of double prompts…. love the bosom glinting, and the moon a great addition.. So glad to see you writing again.
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HA, nice to see you; and thanks for writing in the Trimeric Form. You have written a vivid scene using an excellent photo as inspiration. Each stanza adds effective details.
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A lovely moon dance love story, penned by a moonstruck put on perfect trimeric form; what a fun read, H.
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How about a “moonstruck poet” instead? Hey, when I was here earlier, I had no idea that you would so masterfully serve the parameters of both dVerse & Toads prompt; crazy good job!! I had t write two different poems to get it done .
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Moon SonG.. widows breath..
Black hair girl.. SonG gone lost..
Sweet life lives.. lips so smooth..
Hair illuminating.. full moon lit…
Black hair girl.. SonG gone lost..
picks up pieces.. Love before..
scattered here ’bout.. alone..
Sweet life lives.. lips so smooth..
Ample shoulders.. strong and true..
SonG Love Lasts.. moonlight hips..
Hair illuminating.. full moon lit..
sMiLes arise.. new born Love..
Phoenix shines.. hEr first breath..:)
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Such a wonderfully romantic piece 🙂
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This is a perfect trimeric to complement the photo!
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She looks like a dream, whirling through through the nightly sky ~ A lovely ode to the moon~ Good work on the form HA ~ I hope you are well ~
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Very lyrical execution of the form!
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Serene and lovely to see you back, hope you are well HA.
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she is but a miser’s thrift…. Very nicely done!
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Simply stunning…your words describe the moon in such a delicate, tender way…an object wandering, that we wonder at, so true.
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This is a very stylish piece, start to finish, very polished and profound.
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aw…a beautiful ode to the moon…
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Atmospheric and full of a sense of mystery.
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“hair frazzled in wisps of clouds, illumination of the passing lives.
she is but a miser’s thrift” so many lovely, unique lines.
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So many wonderful lines laced in here! Stunning!
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beautiful moon images!
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Fabulous phrases for wonderers and moon gazers…and great use of form, HA!
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Just an object? At first I thought you were penning an homage to the Goddess! 🙂
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This is surely resulting from more than a mere gaze at the moon.
Much love…
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a graceful and lilting pen – please accept my apologies for visiting so late – thank you for adding your voice to the toads prompt ~ M
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