a blessing that ricochets off my chest
to fall on my bare toes, scarred and
engraved with the lines of silent sky,
that blessing is what I hold, much like
a dead flower in my palms, watering
as a futile attempt for it to reawaken.
I shut the heart inside a jewel box,
to beat unheard by lines of leisure,
it is like the peeling paint that just
won’t fall, demanding attention of
its decay, hurting eyes, I don’t want
to see anymore, everything in shreds.
there is a view at the end of all lines
that beckons all those lost leaves
plucked away from the home tree,
I am in the midst finding my way
to the chasm where it stops being
of consequence, needed no more.
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For Sunday Mini-Challenge at With Real Toads. I am also going to link it up with Poetry Pantry at PU.
Image source– It is an oil on canvas by Piet Mondrian.
‘i don’t want to see anymore’…through my eyes, but through your inventive ones. Love the dreamwork and magical images.
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“engraved with the lines of silent sky” – what a great line that is! And “all those lost leaves plucked away from the home tree.” Very cool write!
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The line and the path that beckons us on, maybe not the road less travelled, rather the lure of what so hard to avoid and where we are at that end — wonderful write Anmol.
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Agreeing with Bjorn and the other comments, this is such a beautiful, thoughtful write. Much emotion, along with sadness. Love this A.
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I am in the midst finding my way
to the chasm where it stops being
of consequence, needed no more.
Great ending HA! Yes we’ve had enough just get on with it. That’s life at its best to progress! Great lines!
Hank
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Your many metaphoric comparisons are excellent in this introspective piece.
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it is really an interesting thought…the line at the end of all beckoning all the fallen leaves back to the original tree….there is an interesting spiritual connotation to that amnol…..
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Yes, I agree with Brian. Very nice work, HA
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I specially like the ending – of finding one’s way, back to the home tree ~ The journey is full of turmoil & chasms specially the heart in the jewel box ~ Have a good day HA ~
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Your poem speaks to me of taking a journey, of finding one’s way, of trying to awaken. In that it has universality, HA.
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the heart shut in a jewel box was the image that hit me most here anmol… for me the heart is what needs so much protection and still we throw it into things with both hands and it gets the toughest beats… though it has lots of recovering potential
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Well let’s enjoy going to the end of the line… in case there is no end… 🙂
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Such fresh and vivid writing Anmol. Lovely poetic ending too… Thanks for a great read – I’ll be back for more… With Best Wishes Scott http://www.scotthastie.com
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Fascinating, and beautifully said.
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Hey, HA–wonderful to move to such a spot. Very vividly told. k.
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This sounding inspiring to me because of the reawakening and the reading between the lines to come to a realization that we are whatever we want to be. At least this is what I obtained from it.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. A reader always finds a new way of understanding in a written piece.
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Yikes. Can we get rid of those lines, at least make them fade into of no consequence? Exquisite troubling clinging images. Dead pain(t).
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This is lovely, and I enjoyed the read very much.
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Poor heart… shut away in its luxurious box… beating when someone notices…
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As old as time is a lonely, broken heart. And this is a poem that does it justice.
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A captured heart, a road less traveled…we don’t always like the destination. Great piece!
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i was looking at the painting , and reading the words, and can’t help but sense a bit of gloom.
don’t get me wrong, the imagery in the poem are brilliant. 🙂
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Several images in this just stopped me dead–the heart in the jewel box, the flaking paint, the lost leaves being beckoned back– fine arresting writing.
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This is where I tell you that, for me, this feels like a cycling of falling away and rising…of a small dying and re-birthing…beauty never ending only transforming. Beautiful and thoughtful poem.
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We are all needed…even when we are stuck in the darkest chasms…hard to see when we are stuck inside though?
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Yes the box may keep it well, but its meant to be seen.
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