sky riddled with clouds-
they rival fog’s foam blanket
on this wet day
~
ah, a travesty-
the pale blue sky reflected
in a pool of mud
.
A gentle effort to write something, after reading this awe-inspiring haiku by Sogi:
ah, for coolness,
it rivals the water’s depth –
this autumn sky
Linking it up with Carpe Diem Special # 125.
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The second one… what a travesty indeed… but who can blame the sky for blending with the mud.
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Great set Anmol … I like them both a lot, but that second is in a way so full of humour and I like the idea of travesty of the blue sky in the mud … chapeau!
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