trespassing through a body made up of
jungle leaves, water weeds, fossil prints,
I engender a whole history in me, of rock
archives of gullible paints, of guitar riffs
eternally hovering in layers of time, but
.
then I am a trespasser, just passing by
(though sometimes it seems like a very
long distance, and other times, it is
just so short, like an old pair of socks)
today I am, tomorrow someone else
who would make the skin crawl all over
once again, because cowardice is true
and nothing else, in this banana peel
that you slip over as if its your own life,
that you can hitchhike anytime, I do so
in my dreams finding the end in blood
(fearsome.. ain’t it.. what truth beseeches)
.
I crackle my pale nails of toes, of fingers
that wriggle like an alien creature but I am
as well, (remember) a trespasser, through
life forms, through elements, so to burn
and drown, and ravaged by air, or buried
in the heart of the soil, and still existence
glistens as long as there is a color in me,
as long as I can draw lines, series of circles,
I stay forever, but never when my palette
goes dry, and then I’d whisper goodbye
.
For dVerse Meeting the Bar.
fascinating journey… goes well with the pic as well… love the body made up of
jungle leaves, water weeds, fossil prints…. i like how you weave nature in and the old pair of socks made me smile… cool selfie..
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first, i love the title…ha…trespassing…the whole history in you….and i like how you bring out how we change as well…tomorrow will be different…how existence still glistens no matter the circumstance….cool response man…
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One does not trespass within the husk that we inhabit, we be borrowers perhaps, borrowing a body, sinew songs, ligament lore, muscle memory–but perhaps we trespass on other landscapes nearby, on other emotions, on other lives; really wound me up; thanks.
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This is fascinating, and filled with a truth that exists in us all. Lots of great line, love the crackle of pale nails of toes…
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today I am, tomorrow someone else… – it’s almost evolutionary the way you’ve expressed this…
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I love this, so much to think about . . . great exploration of self.
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I like the idea of being viewed as a trespasser, interesting concept here HA ~ I also like the idea of glistening as long as there is color in oneself ~
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..sounds frustrating ..I like the banana peel …life can be a slippery business and we have to adjust so much…now am curious about your story; enjoyed reading this.
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There is so much in this, HA. I love the last two lines.
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I think there is a home, a place we belong… hoping your journey takes you there
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Existence glistens as long as there is color in me… and the last two lines are just awesome! I like looking at oneself as a trespasser, and the crackle of pale nails. You made me curious to know some more about you! Lovely self-portrait…
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I love the images you paint here, the slipping in and out, capturing the slippage of time, space and movement – as though you were balancing life on that banana peel! So Cooool!
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I like this story of existence….a cool self-portrait Anmol
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I felt very sad reading this, but we are of the earth trespassing our way till we find ourselves.
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As hard as we may look, we tend to miss touching upon the speck we are, a lot of times. Everyday is a new day and everyday is a new search.
To feel one with my whole self, my body is rare for me. 🙂
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Interesting imagery – trespassers in our own lives, reinventing ourselves daily, and at times the palette runs dry… Food for thought, indeed!
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ahh..to create with palette i think 2..is life fully expressed as such..and the creative juices flowing..must always be replenished in whatever way..possible..to keep a he art together as one heart of life…
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Interesting idea of being trespassers. The palette is a very cool metaphor as well.
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I stay forever, but never when my palette
goes dry, and then I’d whisper goodbye
The effect of the visual art and your words are mesmerizing.
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