
Threshold by Chantal e.y. Bethel
she sings her sweet song, which seems to have risen
from within her smooth skin, vibrating in her strides,
as she plays with her eyes, with smiles, she has stored
in her sighs, as she gets along, she spreads warmth,
shielding us from every storm to come, she is she-
a woman who lives a part of her story, through
her gestures, her expression that tingle the skin of
us lookers, having us laugh with her, pray, sing her
in our words, she is a woman, she strives for love,
she is a key of piano; to touch her is to surge into
the sacred waters, she seeps into our minds to
have us looking for her, even when she’s not there,
she is a woman, a sorceress who carves us into
what we are capable to be, she is a goddess,
she is a mother, a lover, a bond, she is a woman,
she is always the flame that lights our lives,
she is the best as she is, different, wicked, sweet,
she is a woman, and hence she sings, a woman
playing roles unflinching throughout her life,
she is a woman who is everything, that is to be
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Happy International Women’s Day. This simple poem is a tribute from my side to all the women.
And to end this post, let’s relive the song by Billy Joel:
This is beautiful!
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ah, i am sorry on the exam date change and the headaches that will cause…love the piano and the sacred water…you capture a bit of the beauty of women for sure…and something that we can surely celebrate.
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A wonderful tribute anmol, she is the best as she is… And that is all we can be. I am totally, different, wicked and sometimes sweet. 🙂 so your exam is back to the original date? What issues will that cause for you?
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Thanks. 🙂
No, two of my examination dates have changed and the one which was to take place on 10th April is now on 26th(and 26th is the date for an “other” entrance exam for further studies which I was looking forward to give).
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Oh then that’s a pain isn’t it, so what is the answer?
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I can’t do anything about it. Of course, the main exams are the priority. I will thus look for other courses of interest. I have a few other options in mind. I just want to be free of these upcoming exams at first. The things must turn out alright in their natural course of action. At least I hope so. 🙂
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Yes let’s hope so, I hope it all works out for you, I really do, crossing fingers over here and thoughts to the universe.
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Hope your exam is going excellent anyway.. and a tribute to women is right to have…
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what a wonderful tribute to women… she is a key of piano…and the singing…love it… and hope your exams go well… happy sunday
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Didn’t know there was such a day. Is there one for men as well?
Very generous tribute. You must have had good experiences.
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Every day is an international celebration of men and their power. And then there is father’s day,
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A wonderful tribute Anmol…a key of the piano..love it…..
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This is REALLY excellent, HA. I wish I could choose a favorite part within the poem, but I would have to choose so many phrases. This really is a PERFECT poem for International Woman’s Day & it says something about the writer of this poem as well!
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Careful of too big a pedestal! I like the flame as a symbol of birth, your beautiful view of her smile, her touch. I sense you have very good experiences with the women you know. When we love we bring out the best in each other.
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Such a sincere poem in praise of women. Thank you for a wonderful read.
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This so beautiful..thank you for such lovely words this day..
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This poem just got better and better, and rose to lofty heights from the line “to touch her is to surge into the sacred waters” on, to its wonderful conclusion
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Thank you for the lovely tribute to women ~ I like this part best:
she is always the flame that lights our lives,
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“she has stored/in her sighs” <– I think this is a great line/line break
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Thak you for such a love poem to all women 🙂
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