it struck sideways with a scraping sound,

and moved ahead to sit in alignment,

with the victim, not being itself a culprit,

so to emanate from beyond 2 m visibility-

shouts, complaints, some swears-

but after not very long, wheels whirled

and it continued, swaying us in its gut,

shuttering my eyes for a nauseous stupor


I am linking it up with Friday Flash 55.

8 thoughts on “Struck

  1. G-Man says:

    Fender Bender?
    It sure sounds like it.
    I hope this is Fiction!
    Loved your crunching 55
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End


  2. A very creative and unique piece–we’re taken into the belly of the beast here–whether it is an automobile or something else in which we travel, the sense of being passive as danger surrounds is strong.


  3. adameverhard says:

    I felt like “it” referred to either an amusement park ride or people being eaten by some sort of gigantic creature. Perhaps this has something to do with watching the Star Trek episode with the giant amoeba.


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