tracing torn path of life,
I tickle tired fingers of words,
engrave pictures on my dead skin,
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a glow then comes upon the sky,
spread over by dusk,
tending to me with a smile,
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still some clouds lift to
give the last glimpse, of the sun,
so I can hear the voice of her flame
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The poem comes into being by the rearrangement and slight editing of some of my tweets today. The “sixwords” and micro poetry tweets used are:
tracing the torn path of life #sixwords
hear the voice of candle’s flame #sixwords
only a glimpse of her smile #sixwords
tickling tired fingers of my words #sixwords
the sky had glowed all of a sudden,
even though the dusk was growing,
some clouds had lifted to
give the last glimpse of the sun #micropoetry
Be a part of my disjointed journey through twitter. You can find me at HowAnxious.
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I am going to link it up with dVerse OLN and Friday Flash 55.
It is amazing what can come from tweets. Smiles. My favorite stanza is the second one…those three lines are masterfully arranged!
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pretty cool how you created this through twitter…i am so on again and off again with twitter….i like the engraving pictures on your skin…i like the release in the end as the clouds break and her flame comes through….
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what a cool idea – and really like how you wove this together…I tickle tired fingers of words…engraving pics on skin… beautifully penned anmol
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I am impressed that you can write poetry via tweets HA! Your poem is a great illustration of the painting. I particularly like the third stanza.
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Oh yes twitter is such a great inspiration for poetry… sometimes one manage to do those seeds of poem that grow into real poem…
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lovely… i love what you did here!
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Wow! From tweets, really? I love how you did this. I might actually have to get a twitter account after reading your poem 🙂
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A great idea, very cool!
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There are some excellent images in this and it really comes alive. Well done
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What a fantastic idea! Very Creative.
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Very creative writing ~ love the source of your thoughts ~ carol, xxx
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I’m with Mary I love the 2nd stanza anmol, amazing piece.
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Amazing that such a sensitive poem is constructed from “pieces”. Well done.
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A lovely creation from tweets the last stanza made me pause..
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I love the last line /so I can hear the voice of her flame/; sometimes at the ocean at sunset, the sun spreads fire on the waves, before i dives below the horizon–I swear I hear a hissss.
nice job.
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Mesmerizing Anmol!You are so good with poetry:-)
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A wonderful idea which I have as yet to discover. Will have to try it out soon! Wonderful way of getting ideas across. Nicely HA!
Hank
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I love the imagery and sentiments this provoked in me. Well done!
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i was captured by the last line… amazing that this came from tweets. 🙂
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I love the artwork. And the first three lines….so visual to me…so true when I am feeling really tired and worn out…but then…. a new day. Thanks for the post.
http://thesongsofmyheart1.blogspot.com/2014/01/new-horizons.html
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hear the voice of her flame, love the vivid ending ~ I have a twitter but I’m hardly there ~ how fun to weave the verses like lyrics of the song ~
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Interesting process – love your experimentation!
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A tweet poem, what a great idea, and you put this together so well!
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I loved the words tickled tired fingers, terrific
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