the luster of the day light dances in front of me,
and I try to catch it, only to find myself burning,
my skin turning into ashes, a tingling sensation
that comforts me, like rubbing my hands on silk,
only more real, more closer to touch, picturing
the black lines of my desire, of getting absorbed
into the world of no one, splayed onto the wall,
sensing the pain of being in close vicinity of light,
yet not being able to keep a part of it with me,
for I occur with it, without it, straying from it,
for I am a shadow, sometimes dotted with
the precious beams piercing me, but often
found alone, listening to your awes as
you look for your shape, your own self in me
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” Getting absorbed Into the world of no one” sounds like a difficult place to be…and someone looking for their shape in someone else sounds less than desirable as well!
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i like the relationship between the two in this…one not existing really without the other…shadow and light are like that…smiles.
every time you private your blog you worry me, you know…ha.
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I am sorry. But thank you for your concern. 🙂
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ha. dont sweat it…
i hope you are having a wonderful day.
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Your poetry is incredible. Is it a cathartic experience for you, writing it? I used to write a lot of poetry for that reason…
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Thank you. Yes, it is sometimes a cathartic experience for me and some other times, I am a story teller weaving a tale in a poem. But in the end, I am just leaving a trace of me in the written word.
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Oh wow. I shall have to show Cimmorene (my missus) your blog– she loves the storytelling tradition so, and writing in general.
A trace of self… yes, that’s an eloquent way to put it.
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Very soulful and poignant poetry. It certainly sounds like are on a journey.
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Reblogged this on itsyourstorysowriteit and commented:
I love your writing.
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very interesting how you describe the closeness and being dependent upon the other… yet a certain pain is palpable as well… i guess it is like this if you just cannot exist apart from the other
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This has a ghostly really sad feel to it– the rubbing of silk line is especially vivid. Thanks. K. (Manicddaily).
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How light and pain play together in this poetry creates a great sensation…
Happy New Year — 🙂
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Shadows are quite an interesting part of us. They are but they are not. They come with is whether we want them to or not and though they are us, they are nothing. They cannot speak of feel or think. They are just there. It would be kinda interesting to trade places, at least for a few minutes but then I would have to jump back to ‘myself’. Very thought provoking piece;)
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