dissolved-
your trail of footsteps
by sea waves
~
lost
among carvings of life-
your lonely path
.
* For Carpe Diem Special # 63.
dissolved-
your trail of footsteps
by sea waves
~
lost
among carvings of life-
your lonely path
.
* For Carpe Diem Special # 63.
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Nice imagery
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Both lovely and tinged with sadness.
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Excellent responses on Garry’s haiku, that first is really a gem. Thank you for sharing HA.
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A poignant and beautiful write!
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Great happenings with lots of emotions invoked. Nicely HA
Hank
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yes, that first is a gem
lots of depth in the 2nd
Cheers!
JzB
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The first one is spot on!! I love it!
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Both are very well penned, HA. I was thinking about taking the same direction as you did in the first haiku but somehow drifted into another one. 🙂
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beautifully sad…
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nice how your words took us to the water’s edge and next on a path ☺
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I’m always entranced by what waves can do to fresh footprints…
New Snow
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Love the last one.. and waves works as snow.
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