dreary
landscape ahead
the valley left behind
where I could have ended it all
this life
.
of lies
now I must stand
keep on walking this walk
though this soul deserts my bodice
I crawl
.
* Cinquains for Trifextra.
dreary
landscape ahead
the valley left behind
where I could have ended it all
this life
.
of lies
now I must stand
keep on walking this walk
though this soul deserts my bodice
I crawl
.
* Cinquains for Trifextra.
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It can be frightening, that new road ahead. Nicely done!
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How desolate. Good use of the picture in this prompt.
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Powerful!
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sometimes just continuing on, just staying here and trying for one more day is what defines success.
I really enjoyed this because underneath the fear is the fortitude.
Great 33 🙂
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Beautiful words! Thanks for sharing!
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Beautifully written!
Lots of love
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Great imagery (and photo to go with.) Continuing on with life without the light of hope would be a scary existence!
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Very powerful. And a great photo to go with it.
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Very moving and strong piece. Also love the photo.
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Better to crawl forward than to race backward.
Pretty cinquains!
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This has a lot of power written. I enjoyed reading it.
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The road ahead can be daunting if our minds allow it too. 🙂
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Thought provoking and so very true any time we recharge our direction in life.
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Very well crafted. The pic is just apt.
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Powerful writing!
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A terrible choice to have to make! The contrast between the desolate land ahead, the the valley left behind it powerful! Excellent 33 words!
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Oh wonderful cinquains Ammol .. great and full of fear.
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That can be the hardest thing to do. Thanks for linking up! Be sure to come back and vote for your favorites.
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