a bird made a small nest
in the shade of staircase,
with easy access to
the outside domains,
.
I saw it again and again,
as I traversed through
the straight stairs,
rare chance that I missed,
.
my eyes never blinked those
sometimes I stood
in a sort of trance,
my hands limp by my side,
.
those straws and pebbles
would give rise to goose pimples,
as I pondered over this
clever crude creation,
.
it was my secret and still is,
to believe that it hoarded jewels,
diamonds and rubies,
ripe with a sheen of knowledge,
.
it was a basket for me,
full of wonders of many kinds,
I was a kid then but much
hasn’t changed today,
.
i have no memory of
when it was that those feathers
and twigs were swept away,
reduced to nothingness,
.
and now when I gaze at
that dotted starry sky,
I see a new constellation,
shape of that long gone nest,
.
even though I can’t recollect
much of what that time was like,
I just wonder at my wonders,
and wander as I close my eyes
.
* For Sunday Whirl Wordle 129. Also submitting the link for Poetry Pantry # 170. Also, this has come out to be the 701st post here.
HA, I like it when you spread your wings a bit and fly. Sometimes you have to travel long dfistances to go a small way.>KB
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That is really true. Thank you.
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I love the story and feeling in your poem. There is wisdom in it, too. Hope this is a true memory for you.
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smiles…i think there is treasure in it…if nothing else it cradled life until it learns to fly….destroyed probably because it inconvenienced someone else…
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Indeed our life is like this nest, once here and when its time is over its gone.
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A poignant poem of remembering…I especially love your closing lines. Beautiful.
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Interesting…from beneath the stairs to the night sky. Your nest grew wings. Beautiful.
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Having a magpie’s nest to retreat to inside is an essential survival tool..love the magic in this..the absorption of something special..
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This is beautifully done!
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What a beautiful recollection HA! “I just wonder at my wonders,/ and wander as I close my eyes” – I enjoyed your closing lines.
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Ha, I really liked your idea that it jewels, diamonds and rubies. Imagination is a wonderful thing, and why not?? I think we in adulthood have to continue to wonder at our wonders & never lose the ability to dream. A very nice reflection here, HA.
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Pure magic!!
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I like the child’s imagination and wonder ~ I believe there are/were treasure there, smiles ~
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beautiful. Sometimes what we can’t remember in more than abstractness is what shapes us in the end
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A delightful web of thought and pondering one that is never unraveled just added to – thanks
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This was a delightful read. Loved it. 🙂
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What a sad tale of lost childhood which so many of will probably relate to, when we became aware of life’s complexity.
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You have expressed the delightful treasure of a child’s imagination! Lovely writing!
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I love the quiet reflective tone of this, and the idea of seeing a constellation in the shape of the nest. Really beautiful poem.
One question… in the first line of the third stanza, should the word “those” be “though” (my eyes never blinked though)?
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a childs view… objects..events that shape us..like the nest…and we know really not why…
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