the life of a scarecrow
poses like a crucifix shadow,
waiting to pick at his own scabs,
scaring away the light,
persevering the darkness,
rife with stagnancy,
day after day, night after night,
beheading the grievous crows,
and hooking up their hearts,
to the smothered shirt sleeve,
picking at those feathers,
chewing away their juices,
drowning in pools of blood,
left to speculate, ponder
at the growing cacti,
burning in the moon light,
when he spits and urinates
his wretched purposes,
creating a raucous,
wailing with the guts of owls,
and as the sun rays dawn,
he takes up his place,
claiming lecherous life
of cackling appearances,
posing like a crucifix shadow,
waiting to pick at his own scabs
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* My friend Charlie Zero wrote the lines (now in italics) as a comment to a scarecrow haiku I posted yesterday. He further suggested me that I could write a poem out of those lines because I had certainly liked them. Isn’t that great? Those lines acted as an inspiration to me. Thanks to Charlie. Please do visit his site. He writes some wonderful poetry, unconventional and very true-to-face in nature.
I will not look at a scarecrow in the same way again. You have given quite a sinister picture of them.
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This is amazing. I love it.
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This was very focused full of vibrant imagery and powerful in its intent. For me there is the essence of a Christ-like figure anaology (I am in no way religious) but it is more on line with myth. Great Read.>KB
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oh heck…you brought it def. alive…
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Sometimes the scarecrow if the greatest of muse…and good news…the return of life2…your words muse2…
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That’s dark
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nightmarish !!!!
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fitting post for Friday the 13th (just past) – the pic is downright scary in its impersonation of the crucifixion scene…
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whew, there is some grit in this one…picking your own scabs, a brutal end….the pissing and retching….could you imagine hanging there…nice allusion to it as a crucifix as well…..
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It could not be further from Oz! So heavy and dark and ponderous — loved it, HA.
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Bravo!
This is pure brilliance and I’m so glad you took my words and turn them into something magnificent and gritty. Which I think its something everyone should envision.
I love your poem and the way you’ve capture all the imagery. You have my respects my friend. 🙂
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You inspired me… thanks for that. And I am so glad that you liked this creation. 🙂
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You are welcome.
I’m happy that I have inspired you and that makes me the happiest human being on earth. And thank you for being such a good friend to me and reading my work.
You’ve done so well and I’m happy again for what you have created. 🙂
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Very good… and that scarecrow scares more than crows
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I think this is one of my favourites – you have mastered the macabre with your words – excellent HA.
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Whoa…not my kinda scarecrow! But very well written!
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Wow, that is one scary image..you certainly have woven the realm of darkness into this piece..well done sir…
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Wow, I just love this. Dark and eerie piece to go with a stunning image.
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ooo..this is spooky good! Perfect for the upcoming season and Halloween.
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How very appropriate and imaginative to give the scarecrow such eerie characteristics. After all he is supposed to scare..Well done, haunting imagery.
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