wine and Midas in goblet
blind with orgies of desires
flows blood of passion and greed
wine pouring out of canal
ever flowing nectar of lust
golden touch of coital love
*Written in response of Right2Write Prompt 10. Please do participate yourself. For more info, click here.*
7 thoughts on “Intoxication, Ejaculation: Tanka”
an interesting pair….wine will, if enough is drunk lead you to some really weird places, that is for sure…smiles. and the last, so true, eh? smiles.
Fabulous – love the prompt too!! 🙂 🙂
Intoxicating & entiricing, oozing of coital love ~ I like the five line poem (I hesitate to comment on tanka form though) ~ Thanks your visit to my blog ~
So perfect for the prompt. Fascinating read. 🙂
Haven’t seen the prompt – but I enjoyed and understood your interpretation HA.
Thank you. I will be glad if you could also participate in the prompt. 🙂