Paper Lanterns Tan Renga

the paper lanterns

float away to neverland

pure light of spirits


burning with ethereal light

stream adorned with memories


* I’m glad that Kristjaan has chosen one of my haiku for the Carpe Diem Tan Renga Session this week; complimenting the haiku are two seven-syllable lines, completing the renga.


13 thoughts on “Paper Lanterns Tan Renga

  1. The mystery about paper lanterns and the sea are incredible beautiful. And the reason why I say this, is because no matter how much we want to fly towards the sunset. I can only imagine how beautiful it would be to touch the sun and the ocean.

    This is how I interpreted your poem here…Great writing my friend. 🙂


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