tether
the prisoners
by orders of the crown,
behead revolution in loft,
spread fire-
.
fire spread-
lofting upwards,
killing the queen tethered
to luring gold drapes of palace,
crown burnt
.
* For Trifextra.
tether
the prisoners
by orders of the crown,
behead revolution in loft,
spread fire-
.
fire spread-
lofting upwards,
killing the queen tethered
to luring gold drapes of palace,
crown burnt
.
* For Trifextra.
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Ooh, ooh. Dashes stuck to words. Sneaky. Saves a couple of words there 🙂
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Magnificent picture, and a powerful, brief description of (I assume) the French Revolution. Well done!
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Well, she ordered fire…though I’m sure this isn’t the outcome she expected! I really like how you used the words again in the second stanza to show the turn of events.
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Clever remixing there!
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Very clever. Love it!
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‘Behead revolution’ – I really liked this phrase and the reverse repetition of ‘spread fire’. Great imagery!
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Very clever turning of the tables. Nicely written! 🙂
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I’m still not sure if the politics of old are any worse than modern times’.
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Lot of stoy packed here… a little bit classic but still with a lot of modern myths to work upon.
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That was quite a turn table. Loved reading it. Loved the burning palace in watercolor too. You have used the prompt words so many times, yet told a complete story .
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