just the cellarpit;
only the catbird recalls
the swing of the gate
.
(1.) dancing dead bones in the night
orchestra of olden owls
~
(2.)digging up long buried bones
silent thud of closing gate
* For Carpe Diem Tan Renga # 12. The haiku is Southard’s The swing of the gate. I have completed the renga twice.
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well done finish of renga ~ carol, ^_^
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Your changed the poem to a Poeish poem.
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I knew there was something dark beyond the gate
well done renga
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scary but great tan renga
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