Among the stars… I can feel your gaze

* This is the first draft of a Villanelle. I just wrote it but I am not so in the mood of editing. I just noticed that this has come out to be my 600th post on this blog.

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among the stars you rest your head

not so bright, but still not so dim

I can feel your gaze on my bed

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you have a sheen of love, bright red,

that appears to me now quite grim

among the stars, you lay your head

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up above is where seams your thread

emanates from darkness your hymn

I can feel your gaze on my bed

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I ignored when, your pain you bled

which now across the sky does swim

taint the stars where you rest your head

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you survived every day with dread

one day tired, you did lose your vim

your tearful gaze, I feel on bed

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you were alive but you were dead

you survived because of your whim

among the stars you rest your head

I feel your gaze now on my bed

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* I am also on Facebook now. Feel free to contact me here.

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