I’d like to take the opportunity to introduce a poetry form, I created earlier this year. I never named it but included a number of poems written in that style, in my poetry collection which you can download from here.
Rules:-
1. Three stanzas, two quatrains followed by a couplet.
2. Rhyming scheme- abcd/dcba/ee.
3. Theme- Some strong emotion or a powerful act.
4. Optional use of a color for narration.
I am sharing a poem written in this style from the said collection.
Gold Pride
the gold pride of the gods
seeping down the Eden,
penetrating in the soil
and under the ground
.
Hades cry out a shrill sound,
the gore of earth does boil,
the weapons form a redan,
and are activated, the death pods,
.
suffer the mortals, pain and blood,
amidst this amour pro-pre, crud
.
* It is quite a simple form to adopt. I would be delighted if you try writing this way.
A nice form.. a little bit like a short sonnet… I think it is something worth trying … would it be OK to do it in tetrameter?
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Oh yes. You are free to mold it in any way.
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HA, I really like the form and the content — suffer the mortals indeed. You are so creative!
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Thank you. 🙂
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This is really cool. I certainly want to give the form a try (I’m going to make a note to myself right now)!
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That is great. Thank you.
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I love how this form works—So very creative!
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I loved the poem and I loved the form,I am defenately going to give it a try! 🙂
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Thanks. 🙂
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def has the intensity of imagery and pace in this….hmmm might have to give this a try…form usually trips me up but i think i can pull it off…nice use of gold as the color as well as it adds meaning…..
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Thanks. 🙂
I write free-verse dominantly but sometimes do try poetic forms as well.
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I don’t understand all of the rhyming schemes and so on, but I love the poem
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Thanks. 🙂
Sorry… but what is it that you didn’t understand about the rhyming scheme? It is- abcd/dcba/ee
Please tell me. 🙂
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I don’t understand. i write poetry based on syllables and rhyming that sounds right, just never studied it professionally
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Okay. Sorry, I must have made it clear.
The last word of the first line rhymes with that of the eighth line (denoted by a), that of second line rhymes with that of the seventh line (denoted by b), that of third line rhymes with that of sixth line (denoted by c), that of fourth line rhymes with that of fifth line (denoted by d) and that of ninth line rhymes with that of tenth (denoted by e)… and hence the rhyming scheme,
a
b
c
d
d
c
b
a
e
e
Hope I am clear this time. 🙂
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Oh yeah, duh, That makes sense to me now. i see. It is not your explanations. it is my ignorance
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really cool on inventing a new form.. the words go well with the painting as well..capturing the mood
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Very interesting! Nice style
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Nicely done under your sun, captured indeed what takes seed
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Really enjoyed your new form and the poem you wrote using it. I enjoyed the mythology.
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I enjoyed your abbreviated sonnet. It is very effective especially with the use of run on lines which gives it a “feel” of free verse. I think it would be fine in metered feet as well – tetrameter or pentameter. Well done.
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It reminds me of a sonnet, cool form ~ I specially like the ending couplet & use of color/font for presentation ~
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an interesting form HA and I have trouble even knowing what forms are what, let alone creating one!. Nice job.
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