passing under the leafy willows
of a street of temples
an evening of rain
~
tiny drops tingle bare skin
child runs around in circles
* For Carpe Diem Tan Renga # 10. The haiku is written by Shirao (1735-1792); complimenting it are my two verses of seven syllables each.
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Eloquent.
Elegant in its simplicity . . . soft to the touch.
Nicely done.
Cheers!
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Thank you. Have a good day! 🙂
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soft simplicity
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Amazing! 🙂
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Intriguing take HA! The poem jives very well with the rain swept pic!
Hank
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What a delicious and delightful completion of the Tan Renga HA. The simplicity of the joy of children playing in the rain … wonderful … this completion brought sweet childhood memories to me. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you. Yes, I extracted the most simple thing our of the haiku.. the joy of the rain.
Thanks for reading. 🙂
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very good 🙂
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This is so beautiful and moving as it reminds me of happier times in my childhood
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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i love your Tan Renga offering…refreshing.
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