a lonely stray boat
a sad song of centuries
a leaf descends down
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a leaf descends down
rotten layers of a stream
pain of the time lost
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pain of the time lost
voice of the many lives lived
sad note on piano
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sad note on piano
rustic gold spread everywhere
painting on canvas
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painting on canvas
intoxicating beauty
a singing scenery
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* For Carpe Diem Special # 48. The set of haiku is inspired from Jane Reichhold’s creation:
river song
wind blown from autumn trees
a stream of gold
Never before have I thought of a stream as having “rotten layers.” But why not? Everything has something that it tries to hide from others…
Riversong
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Everything has something to hide. Thanks for sharing words.
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the last two are my favourites HA.
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked them.
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Your last verse, especially, sings of the glory of autumn! 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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Your penultimate speaks of the melancholy of the fall into winter. An unusual painting that feels the glow of an indian summer at sunset.
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Thank you for sharing words.
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So beautiful! And I love the photo (painting?) as well.
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Thank you for the kind remark.
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A beautiful series of haiku, and all inspired on the one by Jane, really you were on a roll. This is wonderful and that photo going with it is just gorgeous. Thank you for sharing.
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thanks, Kristjaan.. I enjoyed working on them. 🙂
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Love the image of the lonely boat and all it has seen or experienced…the central focus.
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thank you.. 🙂
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My favorite by far: “painting on canvas
intoxicating beauty
a singing scenery”
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Thank you so much.
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