Red tear-stained eyes: Tan Renga

decomposed flowers

silent witness of a relative

red tear-stained eyes

~

now lie before the head stone

fresh flowers of memory

*The haiku is written by Kristjaan. Complimenting it are my two verses of 7 syllables each, thereby completing the renga. For Carpe Diem Tan Renga # 7.

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11 thoughts on “Red tear-stained eyes: Tan Renga

  1. What a wonderful completion of the Tan Renga HA. The way you have associated on the first stanza is just great … and that last line is really a wonderful line. Thank you for sharing this with us.
    Namaste

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