it was the thirteenth time
(she was counting)
when she heard his voice,
somewhere from far away,
but still close, too close
(as if whispering in her ears)
.
she had devoured him,
tasted his blood and drank it all,
seven pints of it and
left his flesh to rot away,
or be the subject of a vulture’s dream,
she had gotten rid of him,
(that was what she believed)
but still she could hear his voice,
.
as it was when she slaughtered him
to bits, seventeen pieces that stood apart,
torn away from the lifeless dummy,
she had snarled as she chewed down
his three eyes that once saw beyond
and sucked his lips that once kissed,
.
she still heard his voice as it was
when she punctured his artery
and drank his life away, as it was
when he thrashed in her feathery arms,
struggled but then relaxed,
accepting what was to come,
lusty for her to take it away,
the poison that was left of him,
.
she still heard his voice,
as he looked within her,
he penetrated her soul,
with those dead eyes that saw
but never saw again,
.
she still felt his voice
tingle her back, (he was there),
she felt him within her bones,
his life flowing in her vessels,
she was the body he had,
.
she wanted him as prey and had him,
(and believed that he was hers)
but it changed when he came to rule
over her, it was his voice
beckoning her to do what he desired,
it was his eyes that had come alive,
and looked through her,
and those lips she had fed on
were there speaking back to her,
his voice that emerged from within her,
he was there, (always been there),
he had become her soul-mate
*For dVerse Poetics. I took a slightly different approach and wrote a dark poem with certain ominous numbers.
Chilling and effecive!
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thank you. 🙂
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geez…now that was intense…graphic…but also very interesting…i like how in her attempt to take him, take from him—in consuming him, she was not able to rid herself of him but he became a part of her…made me think of those that are haunted by those they hurt or even kill…what a penance eh? this is def much different than what i have read of yours…good job trying out something new…
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thank you.
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Whew, that was definitely chilling. I like it when someone writes something unexpected….nice take!
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thanks.. 🙂
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I agree with Brian, a great new theme from you. On the surface maybe like a vampire story, but just like the great myth with many layers nested within….
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thanks, Bjorn… multiple layers allow the readers to have their own viewpoint.. like when I read it the first time myself, I took it as a romantic relationship gone bad.. and now I see something else in it.. and Brian took it as the murderer, now under the shadow of suffering.. guilt for the crime.
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I agree with what has already been said. Thanks.
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thanks for the visit.. i liked the prompt.. 🙂
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Thank YOU!
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Sorry, HA. Had to stop reading. Too gory for me. I’m overly sensitive to this. Please forgive me. Wanted you to know I did stop by.
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That is completely fine, Maggie.. I know it is gory and dark.. 🙂 sometimes I find it hard to read such pieces myself.
Thanks for the visit though.. 🙂
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Oooo chilling! Epic and finely crafted!
Sharonlee
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thanks for reading.. 🙂
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Excellent..reminds me of a book I read years ago, “The Hunger.”
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thanks, merbear.. have to search about the book. 🙂
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Whitley something with an S. 🙂
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will look for it.. thanks. 🙂
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Wow, this really drew me in… chilling and intense. Enjoyed this dark read very much! 🙂
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thanks.. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.. 🙂
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More than it appears at first gulp, err read, and it becomes more. Very good!
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Ha! Thank you… 🙂
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Yikes! A very mathematical sort of vampiric situation! But the numbers lend a ritualistic feel. Very scary because so vivid. k.
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thank you.. the idea was to scare you and give you a chance to think.. 🙂
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Very cool write 🙂
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thank you… 🙂
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oh heck that gave me shivers – and the twist of how things change and turn out in a complete unexpected way… heck
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…the brutal effect is quite effective… & creepy… but soulmates are soulmates no matter how many deaths she would wish to grace unto him… poor love…aww… loved this… smiles…
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thank you… soul-mates are soul-mates.. t’is true.. 🙂
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aaaah so GOOD! dark and delicious… one satisfied customer on this end. 😉
love the imagery – chilling and provocative. awesome write
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thank you.. 🙂
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This was so gripping. I’m trying to imagine how she looks in her feathers…
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thanks for reading.. howsoever she looks, I bet she is beautiful.. 😀
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