grim day of no light
cold wind prickling tender skin
a single drop clings
~
a single drop clings
others emerge from within
the whole being shivers
~
the whole being shivers
long look at a far distance
no light this grim day
grim day of no light
cold wind prickling tender skin
a single drop clings
~
a single drop clings
others emerge from within
the whole being shivers
~
the whole being shivers
long look at a far distance
no light this grim day
Your haiku work perfectly with the mood of the image. I can very strongly relate with your haiku suffering myself from Depression. Fantastic work =)
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thank you for your kind remark.. 🙂
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I agree…perfect reflection to the photo.
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thanks, Melanie.. 🙂
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far from this weather, but feel the chill… lovely pic and poem
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thanks.. for the kind remark.. 🙂
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I love the connected haiku pattern.
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hanks, Charles.. and all thanks to Kristjaan(Carpe Diem Admin) for it was his idea of writing a cascade..
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Thank you for coming by my blog. Your haiku are beautifully written with sensitivity and depth.
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Thank you for being so kind in your remark.. and for paying me a visit. 🙂
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I feel the weather, the melancholy, the depth of your haiku. Great writing.
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thank you.. 🙂
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Beautiful and the photo complements it very well.
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thanks.. 🙂
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You have captured the feeling of the image in haiku superbly…beautiful
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thank you so much… 🙂
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made me shiver just reading it .. excellent work
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