Spring garden July 19, 2013anmol(alias HA) blooming spring flowers bees humming on the green fields warmth of air seeping within ~ brightness pierces sight noisy buzzing of the bees warm air intruding within source Poetic form:- Sedonka Share this:TwitterFacebookLinkedInTumblrEmailPinterestRedditPocketMorePrintTelegramSkypeLike this:Like Loading... Related
ah, lovely imagery in this…def evocative of spring… nice use of multiple senses in this as well. LikeLike Reply July 19, 2013 at 16:52
This poem and image, almost make me believe places like this only exist in movies nowadays. Lovely, with a tinge of longing. LikeLike Reply July 19, 2013 at 20:50
true.. it is difficult to find such a place today.. thanks for sharing words.. 🙂 LikeLike Reply July 19, 2013 at 22:10
You have made me HEAR the bees through your poetry today! A well-composed write. LikeLike Reply July 20, 2013 at 02:33
Fine use of this short form to bring to mind the gentle promise of spring, just before the heat of summer takes hold. Bees are so important; what is happening to them? LikeLike Reply July 20, 2013 at 13:31
ah, lovely imagery in this…def evocative of spring…
nice use of multiple senses in this as well.
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thank you.. I appreciate your kind remarks.
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You do great on this . tight evocative poem
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thanks.. 🙂
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This poem and image, almost make me believe places like this only exist in movies nowadays. Lovely, with a tinge of longing.
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true.. it is difficult to find such a place today..
thanks for sharing words.. 🙂
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I would love to be there!
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me too.. 🙂
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You have made me HEAR the bees through your poetry today! A well-composed write.
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Thank you so much for the kind remark. 🙂
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Fine use of this short form to bring to mind the gentle promise of spring, just before the heat of summer takes hold. Bees are so important; what is happening to them?
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Lovely write…so sensory and vivid.
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thank you… 🙂
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