Spring garden

blooming spring  flowers

bees humming on the green fields

warmth of air seeping within

 ~

brightness pierces sight

noisy buzzing of the bees

warm air intruding within

Poetic form:- Sedonka

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13 thoughts on “Spring garden

  1. Fine use of this short form to bring to mind the gentle promise of spring, just before the heat of summer takes hold. Bees are so important; what is happening to them?

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