sweeping the porch
bright prints of raindrops
followed by splashes
~
a silent bright noon
swept across the verandah-
moving shades of trees
*Written for Carpe Diem Special # 47. The first haiku is written by Jane Reichhold and the second one is my inspired creation.
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love how the moon is swept in this haiku. Way cool.
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Oh I love watching the shadows make their way across my day! Delightful!!
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thanks a lot… 🙂
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I like the idea of noon being swept by forces beyond its control…
Sweeping the Porch
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thank you.. 🙂
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Very nice imagery!
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thanks, Maggie! 🙂
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Gorgeous!
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thank you.. 🙂
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Silently the trees marking time. Very nice HA
warm summer raindrops
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thanks.. 🙂
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yes, the hot midday does seem silent…is everybody on siesta?
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There is a serenity in your words.. sitting watching shadows
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Sounds like Bjorn has lots of practice in the art of shadow watching!
Sweeping the Sky
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verandah is one of those words that are created for poets…
and that one word paints a beautiful southern picture
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thanks.. I love the sound of this word.. 🙂
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