in the stillness
between the arrival of guests
awaiting the sound of steps
eyes droop down under spring sun
* The haiku is written by Buson and the two following verses are my creation, complimenting Buson’s haiku. For Carpe Diem Tan Renga #6.
4 thoughts on “Complimenting Buson’s ”In the stillness””
There is a very nice element of mystery in the last line.. I think it connects very well to the rest…
thank you, Bjorn!
“awaiting the sounds of steps”, what a great line. Made me think about the time that I was working as a nurse in a nursery home for the elderly people.
thanks a lot.. 🙂