in the stillness
between the arrival of guests
the peonies
.
awaiting the sound of steps
eyes droop down under spring sun
* The haiku is written by Buson and the two following verses are my creation, complimenting Buson’s haiku. For Carpe Diem Tan Renga #6.
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There is a very nice element of mystery in the last line.. I think it connects very well to the rest…
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thank you, Bjorn!
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“awaiting the sounds of steps”, what a great line. Made me think about the time that I was working as a nurse in a nursery home for the elderly people.
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thanks a lot.. 🙂
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