Silent
Remain silent
No
no don’t…
silent
sshhhh…
please…
silent
please be silent
my dear child
uh..uh..
please
let me go
silent
silence
no
I said, SILENCE
uh.. p..p..pl..please..
Don’t worry
My child
Sshhhhhhh..
.
* For Trifextra.
No
no don’t…
please…
uh..uh..
please
let me go
no
uh.. p..p..pl..please..
.
* For Trifextra.
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That’s incredibly eerie and sad.
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I know. Everyone would see this episode differently..
It was thrilling to write it.. but in the end, it made me sad.
Thank you for sharing your words about the piece.
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oh, as the mom of twins who are 5, I hear myself saying shh too often, in church, in Walmart, In the movies, but really they just want to express themselves. Sometimes I wonder if there is a happy medium with it…where I can let them make the noise of their life.
this was good…and sad, and made me think, as a mom, most of all.
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Thanks for reading..
And for sharing your experiences with the twins. I wish you all a good day ahead. 🙂
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Wow, how dark is that! I’ve clearly got some way to go…
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Thanks for reading.. 🙂
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Oh wow. So much said with so little.
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Thanks.
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Yikes. This is so haunting and intense.
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Oh!
But thanks for reading..
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So many ways to read this. A parent and a child? A teacher and a pupil? Two voices inside one person’s mind? Chilling and great
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Thanks.. I was curious as to know the way every one was reading it. Thanks for sharing that with me.
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I read this as a priest molesting a little child. Very ominous, creepy.
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Thanks for reading.. I conjure up a different situation myself when I read it..
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Either way its the best one so far. You got my vote.
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That is really kind of you. Thank you. 🙂
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This is something moms have to do but grandmas don’t — which is why it’s so much fun to be a grandma! 😀
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Ha.. lovely.
Thanks for sharing.. 🙂
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I’m astounded how intense this is with so few words. Very, very well written.
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thank you so much.. 🙂
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I feel slightly queasy after reading this. Quite the kick in the guts–and so well done.
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thank you so much..
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oh, heartbreakingly sad.
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it is sad..
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So much left to the reader to decide here. It isn’t clear to me that the child is actually in danger from the person that’s talking. It could be that the person that is telling the kid to be quiet is trying to protect the kid. That’s just how I read it though. I wanted more, but I guess 33 is all we get.
Good stuff dude.
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It could be anything.. I have left it to the readers to decide.
Thank you for sharing your views. 🙂
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I don’t know whether this is scary or comforting. I like the uncertainty.
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thanks.
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This is so softly beautiful. I learned a while ago that a dear friend was diagnosed with schizophrenia. I thought of him when I read this, and the battle he is facing. These 33 words have really touched me:)
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Thank you for the kind remark. I wish your friend, strength to fight his battles. And a good day to you! 🙂
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that was kinda creepy. i feel like there’s a story idling under this.
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It is all in the context of the reader, nice.
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thanks..
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