after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
~
eyes look upon the dark sky
awaiting another blaze
* Written in response of Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge # 4.
* The intriguing haiku is written by Bjorn Rudberg. The challenge was to write a couplet, two verses of 7 syllables each, complimenting the haiku.
Here is another one,
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
~
ears keep on buzzing with sounds
eyes glisten with faded light
Yes, there is a period of sensory hangover after such displays 🙂
Deeper Darkness
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that is what I tried to capture in my words.. thanks for reading. 🙂
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Oh yes… that part of the firework, like a visual echo is always there….
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🙂 Thanks for reading.
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we stand stunned with sensory overload for a few seconds, and hope the display starts up again….nice…
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Thank you.
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I always enjoy the display — and never get enough. Always seems to end before I am ready. Very nice! ~~ Deeper Darkness
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That is true. Thanks for the kind remark.
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Nice completion of the Tan Renga HA, I like them both.
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Thank you.
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Love that sensory second haiku, HA!
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Thanks, Maggie.. 🙂
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