Kikusha Ni’s Creation:-
my body all alone
in this autumn I feel –
the dusk in rain
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My inspired creations:-
alone in the field
I feel the feel of rain drops
stream of silent tears
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at the edge of ship
glancing at shades of water
lone feeling of peace
P.s.- The two haiku I have created are very close to my heart. They are written in response to Carpe Diem Special 44.
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HA … in this two haiku the feelings are strongely there. What a nice take on this haiku by Kikusha-Ni. Your first haiku hits me the most … so strong and with deep sense and feeling in it. Thank you for sharing ….
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thanks a lot for such wonderful words. and thank you for the lovely prompt today.. will look forward to more of such inspiration based prompts in future.
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poignant and beautiful
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thanks. 🙂
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Streams of tears do a nice job of signalling aloneness in your poem.
Kikusha-Ni’s Dusk
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Thank you for the kind remark.
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espec. liked the powerful sadness in your first….
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thank you.
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excellent
that lonely feeling is conveyed so well
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thank you very much.
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Stream of silent tears… sound so sad.
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