Inspired Haiku

Kikusha Ni’s Creation:-

my body all alone

in this autumn I feel –

the dusk in rain

~

My inspired creations:-

alone in the field

I feel the feel of rain drops

stream of silent tears

~

at the edge of ship

glancing at shades of water

lone feeling of peace

P.s.- The two haiku I have created are very close to my heart. They are written in response to Carpe Diem Special 44.

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13 thoughts on “Inspired Haiku

  1. HA … in this two haiku the feelings are strongely there. What a nice take on this haiku by Kikusha-Ni. Your first haiku hits me the most … so strong and with deep sense and feeling in it. Thank you for sharing ….

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