Kikusha Ni’s Creation:-
my body all alone
in this autumn I feel –
the dusk in rain
My inspired creations:-
alone in the field
I feel the feel of rain drops
stream of silent tears
at the edge of ship
glancing at shades of water
lone feeling of peace
P.s.- The two haiku I have created are very close to my heart. They are written in response to Carpe Diem Special 44.
13 thoughts on “Inspired Haiku”
HA … in this two haiku the feelings are strongely there. What a nice take on this haiku by Kikusha-Ni. Your first haiku hits me the most … so strong and with deep sense and feeling in it. Thank you for sharing ….
thanks a lot for such wonderful words. and thank you for the lovely prompt today.. will look forward to more of such inspiration based prompts in future.
poignant and beautiful
Streams of tears do a nice job of signalling aloneness in your poem.
Thank you for the kind remark.
espec. liked the powerful sadness in your first….
that lonely feeling is conveyed so well
thank you very much.
Stream of silent tears… sound so sad.