under blazing sun
lone sweltering traveler
comes blowing cool breeze
feel of a cold breeze
sleeping under a fig tree
shaded from sunshine
cold water shower
after a day out in heat
a sound of relief
heavy clouds gather
after days of summer heat
cool drop falls on cheeks
playing small children
change in the weather
* For Carpe Diem # 218
12 thoughts on “Suzushi (cool/coolness) Haiku”
You’re really an artist HA … a lovely series of haiku all with somewhat other image on the coolness. Wonderful picture … such a sereen landscape … Thank you for sharing with Carpe Diem.
Thank you. I am so glad you liked them.
I am pleased to share my efforts with Carpe Diem.. 🙂
Those first cool drops of rain after a sweltering day are so refreshing!
They are indeed.. 🙂
That cool breeze after a long walk is most welcome!Cool
That is true.. 🙂
I see the storm clouds gathering and await the relief from humidity…summer days in Brisbane. Thank you 🙂
🙂 We all yearn for clouds to appear and take this heat and humidity away..
I especially like that 4th one…nice work!
Love the feelings i get when reading about sleeping under fig tree…
Thank you for reading.