bound together with
the fiber of emotions
white deutzias
.
free flowering shrub
exuberant in spring sun
blooming deutzias
.
aura of heavens
surrounded by deutzias
hoisted hands, eyes closed
* Written in response of Carpe Diem # 216 Deutzia flower
I like these very much HowAnxious … I sense deeper layers in these, maybe a bit spirituality. Nice imagery in all.
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Thank you.. π
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The last line surprised me and made me curious about who would close their eyes with such beautiful flowers around? I love how the poem cascades down the page, like the flowers do!Deutzia
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Some one who is lost in the reverie of the very presence of something spiritual around them… just a thought.
Thank you.. π
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Oh my I adore the last one π
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Thank you very much.. π
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I like the idea of exuberant blossoms. Maybe they are getting ready to dance!
Deutzia
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It may really be so. Thanks for reading. π
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the last one does seem quite prayerful
Cheers!
JzB
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Thank you for taking the time to read… π
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Perfect for a Sunday morning read – a good write. ~ M
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Thank you. I am glad to know that. π
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