fishing rod held tight
the bait is set on the hook
catch first bonito
.
pink rose of the sea
ripe with soy and wasabi
ruminated raw
* Written in response to Carpe Diem # 214 First Bonito
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fishing rod held tight
the bait is set on the hook
catch first bonito
.
pink rose of the sea
ripe with soy and wasabi
ruminated raw
* Written in response to Carpe Diem # 214 First Bonito
Brilliant Haiku HA – love the 2nd stanza particularly.:-)
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Thank you for the kind remarks! 🙂
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I remember how tightly I held the rod when I learned to fish although I din’t bait my own hook! Fluking with my Father
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Two wonderful Haiku, thank you for sharing with us 🙂
Hatsugatsuo
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Thank you very much for the kind remark! 🙂
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Wow. Nice work!
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Thank you.. 🙂
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🙂
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A beautiful take on our prompt for today … a joy to read.
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Thank you for the kind remarks. The prompts are wonderful and I look forward to participating in more of them.. 🙂
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I would have to ruminate long and hard before any raw flesh touched my lips! 🙂
Bonito
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🙂 Thanks for reading.
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