Violet Juice

January 11, 2013anmol

Violet juice dripping down

seeping through the lips

gritted through the canines

down it flows to the chest

gives the pleasure at its best

the sipping of intoxicating wines

a quite shudder at the hips

the head be dazzled with a crown

the beautiful lusty juice

through the body, running loose.

P.s.- Its my own poetic form- three stanzas, rhyming scheme being ABCD/DCBA/EE. I haven’t named it, as of yet. I am open to suggestions.

10 thoughts on “Violet Juice”

irishcsred says:

Freaking A. This is damn good.

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January 11, 2013 at 08:04
- howanxious says:
  
  Thank you very much! 🙂
  
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  January 11, 2013 at 16:48
stevehi says:

I’ll second the motion for freaking A . Very good !

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January 11, 2013 at 11:17
- howanxious says:
  
  Thank you! 🙂
  
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  January 11, 2013 at 16:48
howanxious says:

Reblogged this on 20 Lines A Day.

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January 11, 2013 at 16:49
ramblingsfromamum says:

2nd Stanza for me 🙂 hic lol

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January 11, 2013 at 17:14
- howanxious says:
  
  lol 🙂
  
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  January 11, 2013 at 17:36
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