The few words I use everyday
to describe myself
the condition I am in
fall short of
how I actually feel.
I am not very expressive, I know
but I try to express
my emotions, my feelings
my everything through the words I write
which fall short of how it feels
to be trapped within a cage
which opens up everyday and you can go out,
but with a sensor attached to you-
you are given freedom
which fall short of what you need,
you are caged even when the cage is open.
I speak out these words
to express how I feel
which falls short of
how it actually feels.
Well done! The line “you are caged even when the cage is open” is wonderfully expressed.
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Thank you, Christy!
-HA
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Reblogged this on 20 Lines A Day.
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words most certainly do fall short of how we feel, I so agree, but sometimes that is all we have
this was beautifully written and did not fall short at all
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Thank you so much for your kind words…
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Wonderful words and you “show”you feelings through your writing very well. 🙂 Thanks a lot for sharing. Also thank you for visiting my blog. I`ll sure come back to read more of your writings.
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Thank you so much for your kind words! 🙂
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I think this one is my favorite so far…
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Thank you!
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Keep on expressing your feelings 🙂 Your “you are caged even when the cage is open” is similar to a line in one of mine “No encontré la salida de mi jaula de cristal.” …I couldn’t find the way out of my crystal cage”. And thanks for stoppng by my blog, saludos
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Would you like to wrire a poem from my blog? I’m getting them from people around the world and the idea is that people can get to know other cultures, but really it seems that we’re all similar deep down 🙂
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Yes, I would love to do so… Do tell me more about it and the type of poem you would want from me. 🙂
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Any type of poem, anything or anyone you want to express your feelings about, as long as it’s written with love…
Are you on twitter so I can give you an email to send it to?
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Yes, I am on twitter:- https://twitter.com/redrose200
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Now following you on Twitter, follow me back & I’ll DM you 🙂
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