I was hollow, still am if you prod my vocabulary
to pinpoint that sensation when I desert the words
or do they me, the time is my solemn constabulary
and shields my malady I tell of, or so you’ve heard
.
how you see my silver stories, filled cups of caffeine,
I cherish yours for they have a linen white reality
thou art a poet, I am a subjective grain seldom seen,
it was a dire dare that made me relinquish my sanity
.
I am a sentimental sucker, I suck blood red lollipops
to keep me company, I would like to walk with you
you don’t know me but I encroach upon, I shop
for a locket of learning in creative world you drew
.
I seal a numinous bond with your words, your poetry,
a stubborn in-patient, would you empathize with me?
I wilt within the blanket, my knees sing of coquetry
no grudge, no love, observing, I sail in waves of glee
.
and I think to revere you poet of old, I shall holler
that I receive from all that you touch with your color
.
For MLM Menagerie’s Wordle # 17 and dVerse, where the odes/tributes to the poets flow out today.
ha. we get to walk with them a bit in their words…but there are def some poets i would love to walk with…to talk with…to hear beyond the words…how they think…and interesting comparison between you and them…you are def a poet amnol…and this is a wonderful piece and ode…perhaps one day we will walk…and maybe have a coffee together…
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This a brilliant piece of work loved it!
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Oh anmol, this is simply wonderful. As Brian said, you a poet dear friend. This is new favourite of mine. I fell into your words, truly, I love this. How great would it be if all the WP Poets could meet, walk and talk together.
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A poet with way out ideas can well be a good companion to assail of inspiration for success. Nicely Anmol!
Hank
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…to receive from all that you touch with your color…i love the idea of walking with them…side by side…soaking in those words, the atmosphere, spirit…. ah… the inspiration of our fellow poets… it is awesome, isn’t it…
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“it was a dire dare that made me relinquish my sanity” … the best description of a poet, ever 🙂
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“I shop for a locket of learning in creative world you drew”… and it should never end and oh, the pictures we can make!
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Clearly reading the words of poets fill us with the reveries of joy and awe and inspire us as poets. Lovely write Anmol
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Cleverly done – not just a description of you as a poet, but also how you revere other poets. And do I detect a touch of awe and hero-worship there? I know I’ve felt like that when I did get to talk to poets at conferences… unfortunately, I go all shy and say something really inept.
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I had to read this twice–once for the compelling content and a second time to appreciate your skill with the form. Nicely done.
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I love the idea of bonding with words & that ending couplet is just beautifully Anmol ~ Thank you for your words ~
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yes – reading a poem is like taking a walk with them… truth or fictitious, the power of poetry never lies…
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A sonnet (that acts like an ode [mine is not a proper ode but I named it that]). This is gorgeous, real, you, so many phresh phrases, cool jewels, so tempting to take a walk, drink a cuppa, climb a tree, draw a bird, race a rhyme with you my friend. Such a pleasure to find you between the vowels!
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Like brother Bjorn, you ain’t afraid of no sonnets; your words so clever, so engaging, the form never got in my way, never really identified itself; just became a vessel, a vehicle for your fine word necklace, your feast for both fools & wizards; enjoyed the ride, the shape, & the message as tribute; thanks.
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Your 18-line sonnet-ode is the perfect interpretation of the prompt: and also encapsulates the spirit of the dVerse pub – to walk with poets, and grow with them.
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” …thou art a poet, I am a subjective grain seldom seen,
it was a dire dare that made me relinquish my sanity …”
Thank the darer, thank the one who took the dare up and thus expands the numinous possibilities. Poetry is divine: its in us and it surrounds and contains us. How can we not walk therein, sometimes with one another?
Love.
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Anmol, I like this a lot. I do think the poets of old are to be revered, but it is the poets of the blogosphere that I most feel a bond with and would most like to walk.
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Through our online connections, I believe we walk with one another in our own way, sometimes the path is short, sometimes it is much longer. In any case, I always appreciate your words and support.
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I love the “linen white reality” of poetry and yes, Thou art a poet, as revealed openly in this lovely poem of same.
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Such a vibrant piece. I love the blood red lollipops, and the brave honesty: “it was a dire dare that made me relinquish my sanity”
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every time I read something (including this lovely piece here), I feel as though I am walking beside someone who sees the world in lights and shadows I can only ever hope to understand. a very well written piece.
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You’ve given me a beautiful lense to experience poetry through, Anmol. It’s clean line are both dynamic and aesthetically pleasing. Absorbed this line in my heart immediately:
“….I shop
for a locket of learning in creative world you drew”
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You have an incredible talent. Incredible. You waste no words. Excellent read.
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beautifully written – loved the imagery and a wonderful poem of inspiration- K
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